Thursday, May 14, 2020

My granddaughter!

Last weekend, Mother's Day 2020, Linda and I held our first grandchild, Emilia!




The last picture is my daughter Katelyn. So happy for her and Scotty!Emilia is so sweet!

Wednesday, May 13, 2020

Dark Awakening vs Dark Birth: Titles

So when Annabelle's story gained the wonderful opportunity to get published at Big World Network, I really wanted to change the titles of the first two books. I felt that Dark Birth sounded strange. It never sit well with me. I didn't say anything because at the time I couldn't think of a better title.

Dark Birth sounds like some devil child crawling out of the womb to wreak havoc.
Dark Awakening  sounds like a mysterious beginning in a dark world.

THAT'S how it should sound. :)

Tuesday, May 12, 2020

Dark Awakening vs Dark Birth: Content

The main story originally seen in Dark Birth has changes a  bit. Every chapter has changes as it benefited from some great content editing and line editing and so on.

Some things have been removed, while other things have been added. One of the chapters from Dark Threats, (the one where the witches get kicked out the the barrier), has been rewritten and put back in.
The chapter where the Dunston children meet Eliza has been completely removed and something else is in it's place.

What took it's place? What has been added in more than one spot in the narrative? More Salem Witch Trials! Yes, that event now has a stronger part of Annabelle and Roland's first adventures.

In fact, a certain real life historical figure: Tituba, the woman whom the Afflicted Children first blamed for their condition, has gained a nice little part in not only this novel, but the overall series!

So if you like Annabelle's story, if you want more of her, I suggest checking out the book because no matter where you factor into reading the prior versions, THIS version is new, and the OFFICIAL telling of her story.

I suggest getting in on the ground floor of this series. Things are going to get crazy!

Vampires at the Salem Witch Trials!



Monday, May 11, 2020

Dark Awakening vs Dark Birth: Cover



So right off the bat you can see an improvement in the outside look. I'm grateful for the help I received on the original cover, but it never enticed people to read it.

Big World content editor Ahna Larsen fixed all that real quick. Now the main protagonist, Annabelle Foresight, is front and center. She's surrounded by crows. Those birds (the Falabranwyn) suggest a feeling of foreboding, as they should.

She's looking up, drawing the eyes towards the wonderful new title and then the bats, which cause more foreboding, causing the reader to question why they are there. Is it vampires?  What is this book about?

All characters are in silhouette, with the big, glorious full moon looming in the background. A moon that Ann herself has noted a certain love for.

This cover draws attention and hopefully desire to read the story within.
Thank you to Ahna!