We're going for David's birthday! Can't wait! I'll post more later.
EDIT
It was postponed till Sat night.
Friday, May 04, 2007
Revised Chapter 2
It came to me out of nowhere a few nights ago. I figured out how to take the following...
Chapter 2, intro to the setting and two major characters plus intro to three other characters
Chapter 3, intro to three more characters plus the mystery of the town.
Chapter 4, more info on main character
I discovered how to take these three boring chapters that do a lot of telling and merge them into one chapter. I hope I'm showing more than telling.
Anyway, this means stuff starts really happening in chapter 3. I put the new chapter 2 on AW for review.
Gulp!
Chapter 2, intro to the setting and two major characters plus intro to three other characters
Chapter 3, intro to three more characters plus the mystery of the town.
Chapter 4, more info on main character
I discovered how to take these three boring chapters that do a lot of telling and merge them into one chapter. I hope I'm showing more than telling.
Anyway, this means stuff starts really happening in chapter 3. I put the new chapter 2 on AW for review.
Gulp!
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